Love in Awe

Just a short poem of a man considering his blessing.

There is nothing contained in all mountains or in seas,

That can be played upon by so little or so great,

And make music equal in my ears as does your voice.

The honey in your eyes swirls and I taste nectar on your neck.

I am enchained by your slightest breath, and servant of your purr.

It is a thing of tales that we could be.

Author's Note

Wrote this in a couple minutes to get something up and liked it. Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

It was amazing I loved it sincere yet to the point
Loving yet not a book like my poems lol I dislike my poems I only post so that I have something up there and I can get some criticism :)

Beautiful first piece!!:)

[Void Unspoken]

great write! totes to that! i think youre going to do well on this site. hey... things are gonna be rough at first but just get online when you can and just write how you feel at the time. personally... i believe this is a fantastic write. but the thing is that, to me anyway, it seemed like you were trying to force yourself to think of something to write. if you just let yourself loosen up a little and just let your mind wander... you may be surprised at what brilliance you will unlock and all the poetic characteristics that you have. just try it sometime k? but yeah... i so believe that for a quick thing that you did to get something up... not bad! not bad at all! :)

[Bella]

"I am enchained by your slightest breath, and servant of your purr."

That's my favorite line. Great write.