I Still Do...

love can be sick

I despise the minute you walked in my life,

 

Stole the only pride I had, ripped it with a knife

Too much did you hurt me; you beat me up

I felt used and little, drowning in a cup

Long has it been since you’ve seen me smile

Let her love you now, but it won’t last a while

 

Love is a duet, not a chorus of betrayal

Off you go to hell, hope you drown in hail!

Vomit the heart you once ate like a beast

Exclude me from your thoughts and heart at least

 

“You are nothing to me” that is my new prayer

Only hate and despondency fill the damaged layer

Unhappy and hopeless should you be, you innocence slayer…

Author's Note

tell me what you think!!! <3 <3

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

So powerful... how the darkness of this lover just consumed all the light of you... Yes.. nothing can lift us into heaven or throw us down into hell as hard as love...

[Tania]

I think it is an awesome written poem