Dark Day

Weather - Fall

                                                              Dark Day

                                                  Outside, it is gray again.

                                                  The grounded leaves are rotting,

                                                  and naked trees knife the pregnant sky.

                                                  The wind roars warning,

                                                  stirring the heart of the wounded wood

                                                  which cannot be revived.   

Reviews

[NocturnalTide]

Sharp personification here. This humanizes nature herself in a vivid way. I like the imagery.

[Lori Brown Boniciolli]

Thanks for reading it.

Sincerely

Lori

[charlie]

Dark, and nicely written. The descriptions are drawn with a perfect-sharp nib. Vivid and weighty writing.

Well done.

[Lori Brown Boniciolli]

Thank-you, Charlie.