Unraveling Change

Unraveling Change
Category: Writing and Poetry

Unraveling Change
By: Lorraine Pearson
July 1, 2008

Void of expression in
Empty confessions,
Distantly folded inside an abyss.
Mystery surrounding, my
Thoughts so astounding-
Patiently waiting, not wanting to miss-
An end to survival, when
One soul unravels;
Desiring to merge with another in dance!


© Lorraine Pearson 2008

Reviews

[WordMaster]

What a compelling and thought provoking work of art.
Your word selection for this emotion is outstanding

Your finishing line takes the reader into his/her world of imagination and allows them to
stay for as long as they desire

A short poem with power... propelling the readers' soul to find a peaceful place to rest

Hear that?... It applause� just for you!

Well done

[Barbara Walker]

Maybe it's the mood I'm in right now, but this seems like it would be a privledge to see on one hand and a bit scary on the other!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A bit of mystery and intrigue mixed with remorse and regret, I could interpret this many ways, i love that about this poem. You are quite an artist.