Haiku
A Poem by L.L. Lily
© 2013 L.L. Lily
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one of my first poems
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I always wanted to see the cherry blossoms blooms, it must be a pretty sight.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
Yes it is :)
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I've always liked haikus, they're simple, short, and sweet, like this one. Beautiful!
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
I didn't even notice it rhymed until now! This is practically perfect, amazing job.
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A simply beautiful poem... I enjoyed it, thank you for sharing it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
thank you :) actually there are two version's I switched the first and last stanza I'm not really su.. read morethank you :) actually there are two version's I switched the first and last stanza I'm not really sure which sounds better one way or the other but I posted them anyway :)
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Added on October 1, 2013
Last Updated on October 1, 2013
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L.L. Lily
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Everyone has a beautiful life story, you lead it, life writes it to what we call past or history. No matter how small, every little detail counts. My paper, your pen our hands joined as an beautiful i.. more..
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