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A Poem by LostSage
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dedicated to the inspiration of fran

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big dumb guy
stumbling bumbling crumbling
his way through life
guess what happened
he got stabbed
in the heart
with a poison knife
the bleeding finally stopped
but the taint aint
the colors so much brighter then
that big dumb guy
is gonna do it again

© 2021 LostSage


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LostSage
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We live and learn and we weigh things up. Where love is concerned we take risks. We never learn through our mistakes. A relatable little poem Jeff.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

It's good your sis is keeping her eye on you Jeff. She sounds like an angel. We all have our sad sid.. read more
LostSage

2 Years Ago

you! if you didn't live so far away across the ocean....I would come and grab you.....and I would tr.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

........... :)) Have a great day yourself Jeff.
he still drips love's blood
from tainted knife~as dumb guy
never learns from life

willing to suffer
yet again~spins of the wheel
still say he won't win..

Nice write Jeff

Posted 2 Years Ago


LostSage

2 Years Ago

thank you Fran Marie
your opinion is important
....from dumb guy Jeff 🙄
  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

you re not a dumb guy far from it..thats just the poem s character
you re welcome Mr.Jeff
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Added on October 1, 2021
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LostSage
LostSage

Cleveland, OH



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