Broken

This song is owned by me, so please ask before using it. First published on FictionPress.

Dedicated to The Pain Bearer

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Broken

I thought you loved me

I thought we could be

The ones that always

Always spoke nicely

I thought you felt like me

Alone, but together free

Now you left me, and now

Now I can see

You took my love and

Burned it into

Something you could use

You took my heart and

Broke it in two

And I just can't see

Why you chose

To do this to me

I always wondered

Why you would leave me

Never said you loved me

Oh you deceived me

How could you take my heart

And let us fall apart

But oh you left me, and now

Now I can see

You took my love and

Burned it into

Something you could use

You took my heart and

Broke it in two

And I just can't see

Why you chose

To do this to me

(To do this to me...)

Author's Note

First song I've ever written, constructive criticism welcome.

Reviews

[iNSOMniAC]

"Constructive criticism." xDD
Nothing's wrong with it - I actually really liked it. I'm amazed that you'd sit down and write something for me, though... there's not a whole lot of people out there who'd dedicate their work to me.