Adam

Adam

A Poem by Laura Kate

Since meeting you
I've dreamt purely of fresh juice, 
of ripe fruits of the earth
and of quenching my thirst

© 2019 Laura Kate


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I love how you throw out the idea of drinking fresh juice (exquisite imagery), but leave the rest of your message open-ended, as if pricking whatever ideas may be in the reader's mind. I'm soon-to-be 63 & never married . . . I've always said I might've gotten married if only I'd found a guy who squeezed me fresh orange juice every morning *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

4 Years Ago

That is great, Margie! How lovely freshly squeezed juice would be every morning. Now that would be t.. read more



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I love how you throw out the idea of drinking fresh juice (exquisite imagery), but leave the rest of your message open-ended, as if pricking whatever ideas may be in the reader's mind. I'm soon-to-be 63 & never married . . . I've always said I might've gotten married if only I'd found a guy who squeezed me fresh orange juice every morning *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

4 Years Ago

That is great, Margie! How lovely freshly squeezed juice would be every morning. Now that would be t.. read more
it's like when Eve met Adam...if only she had just drunk the apple juice and not picked that particular apple off the tree and offered it to him...
love is a thirst, no doubt about it...and finding another to quench it...that is heaven.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

4 Years Ago

Funny you should say that Jacob, his name is Adam... coincidentally. Thank you for your comments as .. read more
sounds like you might have to drink it before you die of starvation:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

4 Years Ago

I think I should, Robert! Thanks for reading :)
Lovely and refreshing, perhaps a hint of something sensual.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

4 Years Ago

Thanks Edie, I'm glad you liked it :)

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Added on June 24, 2019
Last Updated on October 30, 2019
Tags: poem, poetry, science, chemistry, love, romance, connection, life, philosophy, relationships, compassion

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Laura Kate
Laura Kate

United Kingdom



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