The Champ

The Champ

A Poem by LoveAlwaysJB
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Trying to make a comeback on here.

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  I fell in love with the King of the town 
He showed me around 
Told me his secrets 
Gave me the key to his city 
And left his mark on me


He gave me hope that one day
Will be our everyday 
But all he ever did was lock me up 
In his castle - hidden from his people 
While he enjoyed the company of his merry men and fair ladies


Drinking and dinning for hours every night 
Leaving me guessing 
Thinking that I could be royal by his side 
Believing that I was his precious little diamond
Just all his and everything I did was for him


Now I am exiled from his chambers 
Thrown in the dungeon 
I knew this day would come 
The day all his smiles became false 
And the Joker was me


I created this chaos 
Falling for a fool - made me one too
"Happily ever after" 
Is the greatest myth in history 
Told by many, but lived by the lucky ones


So I know I will prevail 
The warrior in me will fight 
Fight for the champion of her heart 
He’s no King 
But he exists in this world


He will be the knight 
And I will shine again
Brighter than he ever let me 
Because a real diamond deserves to shine
And not to be hidden in the dark.

© 2014 LoveAlwaysJB


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Ah! I hate it, pretty...I hate seeing someone as beautiful as you feel such kinda pain this world gives!
Well ...I hardly read large/lengthy poems but I don't know why, I just visited the page and read your profile ..first off, your profile really makes an impact on me, I love your profile page where you write very thoughtful words about who you are, who the people are and so on ... nice!

And this's what that forced me to read some of your stuffs too so, I browsed "The Champ" and I was just gonna leave the page because of it's length but.. I don't know, why I stopped and read ...and as I started to read your this great poem ..believe me my heart's still seemed curious to read this poem once more...this poem's very beautifully penned and I love it's length .... n I think, this poem needed to be lengthy ....you've proved it that whether the poem's short or long ..the poem's always a poem and if you read, feel the depth of the poem then the lengthy one is often seemed short....

Keep writing, this poem's very deep, as I've already mentioned that I hate seeing someone as beautiful as you feel sad so .. yeah, you've well penned that your really a "Joker" yes, Your a "Joker"..
If you make someone's life beautifully living with your scents and in return what you got... nothing but what you've never deserved.." A Pain!"then yeah, your a "Joker!"
If you make your someone protective and keep him always happy in this world, save him from evils, pray for him days and nights and so on and in return what you got ... you again got nothing but what you've never deserved "A Pain!" then again yeah! your a Joker!
....
"A pain that rips your heart, a heart that passes through much hurt, a hurt that spoils your life and a life where the days n nights're on the line!"

So, yeah, your a fool, your a joker because if you loved a man and man given you pain in return/in reply that's what that makes this world "INSANE!" But now ......
and I hate such kinda bad kings who make their queens sad and put them into the world of pain ...

It's a time to get outta the world of "Jokers!" Fools! because now no more! no more pain! no more hurt! no more regret! let's end this what happened to you! because your a diamond and diamond always shine and spread their white shining light around the world whether a diamond's in the light or it's stuck off in the darkness ...

Well ... nice poem, this poem really touched my heart! Ah! Poor guy! I think, he was a poor king who couldn't see the beauty of your heart, the shining in your eyes, If I were that "King!" I wouldn't have done what he has done with you because your an angel ...an angel of the heart ..when you walk, the sand becomes gold, an ocean damn cold, when you smile, the sun comes up as a sunlight ..but when you do cry ..sun replaces with the moon ..a moon that's unleash to your smile ..

So, pretty! Keep smiling!
Your a real fighter ... let's make the life beautiful with all your scent because this world's became very bad, dear one, let's this world go into the depth of your heart cause, the life's already beneath on your barefoots so .. let that poor and stupid king go into the ashes because your a life oneslf and to make ya happy and safe's what "Prince" priorities ...

(I hope this "Prince" is much better than that stupid king who missed the chance to fly with you into the heaven!) Ha!

And hey ... No! Your not a "Joker!" not even a "Fool!" but a flower ... who's beauty's as same as a red rose and red rose's always red that makes the beat fast into the heart so, not to worry about kings ... as long as "Prince" as same as me are on this world .. you the beautiful angels're safe and happy into their arms because "King" kept you into the arms of "Sword!" but "Prince" always keeps the angels into the arms of flowers ... into the depth of heart without any hurt because "Your not born, not made to consume pain but to someone's rain that washes away the pain!"


Keep smiling, pretty!
Now hey ..c'mmon, don't be sad! You ain't look beautiful with sadness... Forget the past, let's re-start the life n make the life delight with all of your scented smile so that people could pluck the flowers from the sky for you just to be in your life!

Keep shining as same as a "Diamond!" :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LoveAlwaysJB

6 Years Ago

Now this is the reason I write! The only thing in the world that truly has ever mattered to me is wo.. read more
Neon

6 Years Ago

The pleasure's always mine, you beautiful one! Thanks for replying my lengthy review, I hope, My rev.. read more



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Ah! I hate it, pretty...I hate seeing someone as beautiful as you feel such kinda pain this world gives!
Well ...I hardly read large/lengthy poems but I don't know why, I just visited the page and read your profile ..first off, your profile really makes an impact on me, I love your profile page where you write very thoughtful words about who you are, who the people are and so on ... nice!

And this's what that forced me to read some of your stuffs too so, I browsed "The Champ" and I was just gonna leave the page because of it's length but.. I don't know, why I stopped and read ...and as I started to read your this great poem ..believe me my heart's still seemed curious to read this poem once more...this poem's very beautifully penned and I love it's length .... n I think, this poem needed to be lengthy ....you've proved it that whether the poem's short or long ..the poem's always a poem and if you read, feel the depth of the poem then the lengthy one is often seemed short....

Keep writing, this poem's very deep, as I've already mentioned that I hate seeing someone as beautiful as you feel sad so .. yeah, you've well penned that your really a "Joker" yes, Your a "Joker"..
If you make someone's life beautifully living with your scents and in return what you got... nothing but what you've never deserved.." A Pain!"then yeah, your a "Joker!"
If you make your someone protective and keep him always happy in this world, save him from evils, pray for him days and nights and so on and in return what you got ... you again got nothing but what you've never deserved "A Pain!" then again yeah! your a Joker!
....
"A pain that rips your heart, a heart that passes through much hurt, a hurt that spoils your life and a life where the days n nights're on the line!"

So, yeah, your a fool, your a joker because if you loved a man and man given you pain in return/in reply that's what that makes this world "INSANE!" But now ......
and I hate such kinda bad kings who make their queens sad and put them into the world of pain ...

It's a time to get outta the world of "Jokers!" Fools! because now no more! no more pain! no more hurt! no more regret! let's end this what happened to you! because your a diamond and diamond always shine and spread their white shining light around the world whether a diamond's in the light or it's stuck off in the darkness ...

Well ... nice poem, this poem really touched my heart! Ah! Poor guy! I think, he was a poor king who couldn't see the beauty of your heart, the shining in your eyes, If I were that "King!" I wouldn't have done what he has done with you because your an angel ...an angel of the heart ..when you walk, the sand becomes gold, an ocean damn cold, when you smile, the sun comes up as a sunlight ..but when you do cry ..sun replaces with the moon ..a moon that's unleash to your smile ..

So, pretty! Keep smiling!
Your a real fighter ... let's make the life beautiful with all your scent because this world's became very bad, dear one, let's this world go into the depth of your heart cause, the life's already beneath on your barefoots so .. let that poor and stupid king go into the ashes because your a life oneslf and to make ya happy and safe's what "Prince" priorities ...

(I hope this "Prince" is much better than that stupid king who missed the chance to fly with you into the heaven!) Ha!

And hey ... No! Your not a "Joker!" not even a "Fool!" but a flower ... who's beauty's as same as a red rose and red rose's always red that makes the beat fast into the heart so, not to worry about kings ... as long as "Prince" as same as me are on this world .. you the beautiful angels're safe and happy into their arms because "King" kept you into the arms of "Sword!" but "Prince" always keeps the angels into the arms of flowers ... into the depth of heart without any hurt because "Your not born, not made to consume pain but to someone's rain that washes away the pain!"


Keep smiling, pretty!
Now hey ..c'mmon, don't be sad! You ain't look beautiful with sadness... Forget the past, let's re-start the life n make the life delight with all of your scented smile so that people could pluck the flowers from the sky for you just to be in your life!

Keep shining as same as a "Diamond!" :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LoveAlwaysJB

6 Years Ago

Now this is the reason I write! The only thing in the world that truly has ever mattered to me is wo.. read more
Neon

6 Years Ago

The pleasure's always mine, you beautiful one! Thanks for replying my lengthy review, I hope, My rev.. read more
I find this poem very interesting, I loved how in the end you said that they would shine brighter than he ever let them.

Posted 6 Years Ago


LoveAlwaysJB

6 Years Ago

I am glad you loved the ending, and yes shinning brighter than ever how it should be right?
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