Tea and Sugar

The story of a broken relationship

We went together so well

Just like tea and sugar

You told me this love wouldn't falter

You had so much to offer

Why did you give it to her and not me?

I guess I didn't deserve you

You told me it was my fault, and all I did was hurt you

Don't leave, please stay

I swear I'll make it up someway, somehow

Please lay with me, at least for right now

I'm sorry I wasn't good enough for you

Maybe this is why the sky is so blue

Just like tea and sugar babe can't you see?

It's your love that ruins me

Reviews

[Soullesswanderer]

I admire your passion. I can sense it in your writing. I just think you need to dig deeper. Write deeper. You write about love, and ultimately a broken heart. This is great but I still do not feel what you feel when you write. I want to feel what you feel, and the way to do that is to write deeper. I feel it's superficial. Tell me about the plethora of emotions you felt; describe them. Tell me about the meaning of a broken relationship and how it relates to humanity, and ultimately me. Write deeper.

[Orchid Stanza]

Thank you so much for the constructive criticism, I will take your advice and write deeper. It's all for the love of poetry.

[The earth (Titan maphah..]

this is agreat poem I really do love this.... just keep on writing the good things....

[Orchid Stanza]

Thank you!