Your Song

Chemistry was a study hall today...look at how productive I was. lol

 

This song is not,
    how you used to sing.
Not at all what
    I was expecting.

You came to me,
    rivulets flowing.
Pale blue eyes form
    continuous streams.

The news, all bad
    no glimmer of joy.
And to think it's
    because of a boy.

Author's Note

hehe, please review, Though this wasn't written for a particular reason....or was it?

Reviews

[Aldora Sparrow]

Very nice and nice rhythm. Just the middle stanza, I think you should rhyme it just for the flow of the story. I think this might need another stanza between the second and the third.
Short 'n sweet. You should post more stuff (I'm running out of stuff to review! D: Haha) Keep it up!
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[Momo the Elf]

wow! the imagery (i think i misspelled that) in this is phenomenal (i think i mispelled that too lol)! beautiful poem, as always. :) keep writing~!

I like this because it's sort of disguised. Your feelings seem light, and sort of like a song. It's lovely.

[Rainey]

I love this poem, because of how soft it is, yet it sits in your core. Beautiful :)