Friends

This is dedicated to friends in general. It explored the everyday ups and downs of friendship.

 We fight

We love

We Cherish

We glow

 

Your spunkiness gives me light like I could never discover alone

Because of you I never ever need to be alone

But because of you I cry alot at home

 

Some times I believe we will never be friends

Then sometimes I know our friendship will never end

 

You scare me

Excite me

But never seem to deny me my rights

 

To love whatever

To hate whatever

To laugh 

To cry

To scream

 

You let me vent

I let you yell

Even if it's at me

 

We will always love and care about each other

Through the rough, the hard, the tough

Though we may be mad and we may be upset

I will always love you and never put our friendship to rest

 

 

Reviews

[Les.]

Transitory creatures are friends
leaving footprints in our memory through our lifes different eras
childhood friend, schoolfriends, adolecent friends
They come...they go.

[sabrina]

You wrote your poem so simply, yet it expresses everything that you feel in friendship. I like how you also wrote it in opposites, contradincting yourself every other line. Nice work!

[Barries Girl]

Thats well written and so true.

[Mistral Bilgera]

true this poem! you know, while i was reading your work, i suddenly missed the best of my friends! this is true to real friendships that'll stand the tests of time, a friendship without pretense and backstabbing! this is a good work! it you've given justice to what true friendships are! keep it up! :)

[Justin Tobey]

I think this really describes the true, lasting friendships where even when you want to rip your friend's guts out, you get through it eventually. I really agree with everything in this, and especially like the part about venting ;-). Keep writing!