Attack of the P-zombies

Attack of the P-zombies

A Poem by LovingJoy

Lump in throat, ache disorderly,

need a qualia-lude to swallow it,

won't hurt with a little philosophy,

not sentient, not cognisant, a stint

at fifteen minutes = anywhere taken!

Swimming up to the surface you think,

so why does your thing keep aching...

the higher you get, the lower you sink.

Can't let go of some adult teddy bear,

keeping your mind and soul from failing,

stuck on a dirty train going nowhere,

pity pray they'll see your heart breaking.

Oh, my friend, it truly sucks that much,

p-zombie, hate to rain upon the parade,

in the end everything swallowed up,

not the slightest trace of us will remain,

give it time, it all disappears to start again,

our I dids and my alls sucked into a black hole,

it's all recycled over and over in the end,

so what will happen to each pretty little soul...

Eternal oblivion blows the wind out of sails,

but hang on in frightful hope of another turn,

it'll all cook up to billow more cosmic trails,

so don't cry p-zombie, none of this stuff hurts.

© 2013 LovingJoy


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"Swimming up to the surface you think,

so why does your thing keep aching...

the higher you get, the lower you sink.

Can't let go of some adult teddy bear,

keeping your mind and soul from failing,

stuck on a dirty train going nowhere,

pity pray they'll see your heart breaking."

People try , people fail . people swim , people drown all in the scheme of the grand things. It is interesting you talk about frightful hopes for some people do fear the future...Bravo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LovingJoy

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely comment, you are so right in your remarks, much appreciated. We can become.. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You too dear poet...Much obliged...:)....................



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That was amazing!Great flow,and a few things in there to really think about.Great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LovingJoy

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading the poem, and for the kind words, Bob.
"Swimming up to the surface you think,

so why does your thing keep aching...

the higher you get, the lower you sink.

Can't let go of some adult teddy bear,

keeping your mind and soul from failing,

stuck on a dirty train going nowhere,

pity pray they'll see your heart breaking."

People try , people fail . people swim , people drown all in the scheme of the grand things. It is interesting you talk about frightful hopes for some people do fear the future...Bravo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LovingJoy

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely comment, you are so right in your remarks, much appreciated. We can become.. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You too dear poet...Much obliged...:)....................
Wow madam lovingjoy(lol) This is such an interesting piece .Your lines are beautifully ceafted to send your point home.I am thinking that the more you try to succeed at something the more you fail.We need to let go of the past sometimes or it will drag us down.I got this message loud and clear in booming tones.This is my interpretation and I am sticking to it .Yet again I think a great piece

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LovingJoy

7 Years Ago

Many thanks for the read and for thinking about the words, much appreciated, especially as I'm still.. read more
Vidya Bacchus

7 Years Ago

You are welcome dear poet:)
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