Wisdom

Wisdom

A Poem by Tyler and Lozza
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with quotes, i made this short poem x

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When one door closes, 
another opens...
but we often look so long,
and so regretfully upon 
the closed door that we do not see the 
one which has opened for us.
The opportunity is there,
we chose to go the easy way
not the best way.
The man who promises everything 
is sure to fulfil nothing,
and everyone who promises too much 
is in danger of using evil means 
in order to carry out his promises, 
and is already on the road 
to perdition.
Opportunity of trust,
gone.
You may have your suspicions, 
your fears, 
you may even believe there is something, 
somewhere, 
terribly, drastically wrong, 
but because someone else is in charge, 
because there is a part of the system above you 
which you don't know, 
you don't question it, 
you even distrust your own doubts.
Believe.

© 2011 Tyler and Lozza


Author's Note

Tyler and Lozza
soooo? xxx

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Cheers mate :) - Lozza :D x

Posted 12 Years Ago


A perfect rounding piece that really grates the rhyme in all poets, truly great read, well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Ta millie xxxxx - Lozza ♥

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this lozza, Good write, good amount of depth :)).xXx

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Tyler and Lozza
Tyler and Lozza

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