Walking With Strangers

I feel so alone in this world

No one is there for me

To hear me cry

To hear me scream

 

 

I feel so alone

No one seems to care about me

What I want

And what I need

 

I need someone to love me

Cherish me

Care and be there for me

But there is no one

It's like walking with strangers

 

 

Reviews

[No one]

Your poem expresses sentiments shared by multitudes around the globe. What most don't realize is that humans are stuck in their bodies and minds and must get used to being alone. People must first learn to love themselves before they can truly love anyone else or allow anyone else to truly love them.

I feel so alone in this world

No one is there for me

[__Flaw__]

Yeah well...this is a lingering reality. Even if u are with some one....or got lotsa friends...in reality u are and always will be alone. Considering bad times hovering that is :)))
So if u could find someone who really cares...walla....u are the luckiest person alive.
Nice poem...need to work a bit on the structure. Else is a good effort.
Cheers :)))