What Hurts

What Hurts

A Poem by Heidi Hallucination

I watched you walk away

From everything we shared

You knew my secrets

I was so close to you

I watched you walk away

Leaving the memories with me

Hoping I wouldn' fall for it again

From another

But most importantly

These are the things that hurt

© 2008 Heidi Hallucination


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You're still keeping your secrets in this poem... and why not. Sharing secrets with another person, then, having those secrets taken away with the other's going hurts and hurts like crazy. Your post displays that. Powerful stuff. Sad.

Posted 15 Years Ago


whats your lesson, what are you trying to impart to the reader???

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on June 1, 2008
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Heidi Hallucination
Heidi Hallucination

Cleveland, OH



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Hey look at you you came to my writerscafe page your so cool lol. Umm my name's Heidi. I'm a very crazy and fun person. I'm German and i'm proud of it. I love to write poems, books not to much ca.. more..

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