Where the skys are endless

a small poem about a world beyond the sky

Go to where the sky is endless,
To where there is no limit of dreams,
To where life is an adventure,
To where you can fly,
A place that can not become an image but filled with wonder,
Sky's that go on forever,
Dreams that can not be numbered,
A love greater than that of a mortal soul,
Countless hearts to fly with,
And the will to see another sky...

Reviews

[SOUL LESS]

A place that can not become an image but filled with wonder: work on this
luv the last line!

[NyanMeow]

This makes me feel really hopeful. :) The sky imagery is great.

[M.Babu]

I like this alot...It's vivid and has deep sentiment.
You're choice of topic is awesome it ties in with how many times you've mentioned sky(ies). Lovely piece-got me flying

[Luchia Noname]

thanks

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Love it! So sweet and beautiful! I love the color and font!