Rain that falls for another

this is a short story i came up with about rain and love

Walking home from school one late afternoon, the sunset shining on my golden hair my eyes reflecting the clouds. the long day just sliding off my as i stride forward I stand just a few feet behind the entrance to my second life when suddenly something falls to my cheek.
i stare to the sky, to feel the rain drops falls on my lips like sweet kisses, the sun completely gone nothing but my reflection standing behind me till, I hear something other than rain drops looking behind me there stood the man I loved more than another but he did not love me, my mother once told me a women who wishes to be another is nothing but a coward i stood on these words my whole life never wishing to be "her" never changing for another and always staying true to me.
those who did not understand this were not worthy of of one such as me if he could not see me as i was then it was his lose but i couldn't help but want him to embrace me in his arms, arms that held "her" but could hold me but at what cost?
the words he spoke were like promises that had been broken. yet pulled at my heart god knows i wanted to pull him close to me but holding back my desires i walked on ward in to the rain he fallowed behind me looking for a way away from him i ran to the park where he still followed me like my shadow.
Why? Why did he go so far for me he is with another and i dont do one nights.
he grabbed my arm. dropping my bag to the ground the rain pouring on the two of us the said "Don't go." the sweet whisper in my ear i felt my face go hot and the my arms became weak I tried to push away from him but getting no where i accepted what ever was going to happen.
then right as i went at ease he grabbed my face and kissed my lips it was like no other the rain drops had not matched this I couldn't help but wrap my arms around him happy yet something pulled at me in fear then it hit me "Her..." I opened my eyes and pushed him to the ground hoping he wouldn't notice me crying, hoping the rain had covered it up I slapped him and said but a few words" You dare! kiss me when you have her...".
"You who wraps your arms to her waist, touch her hands and face, look at her with your dark green eyes...I am no fool"
"I have wanted to tell you that i love you." he said arising from the ground.
*scoff* I couldn't help but laugh the words i longed to hear were spoken yet they hurt worse than poison,
"I never wanted her..." he said in a soft voice as i began walking away.
"how can you say that?"
i wasn't waiting for an answer as i left .
but yet again he came after me holding my arms i struggled to get loose but i ended that struggle and let myself go...
the rain felt nice on my lips as they pressed against his from that day forward this rain changed me...        

Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

Wow, this was very beautiful,romantic, and drmatic! i loved how you wrote this! great write! :)

[Omegax45]

Quite sad, yet very good. Needs a bit of a touch-up in the sentencing, but very good still.

[WriterMe]

Oh this was so sweet. Indeed I have a special corner for stories which have the element of rain in them. This was a very inspiring write =] Great work.