Ramblings of a Broken Heart

Just what I am feeling as of now..Broken hearted..Sorry if it makes no sense..I am just rambling.

I apologize for not being good enough

To earn your complete love

I apologize for never knowing

That anyone could never love me

I apologize that you hate

when I fully love you

 

 

I wish I could make you happy

But I suppose I never will

I wish I could open up fully to you

But it is something I will never be able to do

I wish I could make you care

But that will never happen

 

I hate myself for thinking

that you actually loved me

I hate myself for thinking

that you actually care

I hate myself for thinking

I made you complete

 

I dream that one day

You will find your way

In your true lovers arms

I dream that on day

You will be complete

with your true lover

 

I hope that you are happy

now that I am gone

I hope this has made your day

as I follow a different road

I hope you will always know

You forever hold my broken heart..

Author's Note

I dont care about grammar problems..I personally feel that one should not judge another's work on grammar..but what the words are expressing..:D

Reviews

[Titus McGuire]

This was very well written and makes perfect sense, you express your feelings so well. The pains and burdens of a broken heart are great, and you so easily weaved that feeling into these words. I feel that most people, those who have suffered a broken heart, are going to be able to understand and relate to this piece, and maybe even feel what you feel. Your emotions are so well captured. Bravissimi.

[The Mad Prophet]

Too powerful, your wrote this with way too much emotion... I like it :)

Very well expressed, powerful message. I can feel what you feel, and that's the point of poetry to me. Of course that means I need to make my road more obscured so no one can follow me, but this is well done. Very good.

I hope you make a new heart, you old one was holding you down. I lost so many things I believe that the answers to a problem can be found in loss. Maybe a new heart heart, then tred on careful grounds until your new heart gains the power to sway another soul to your whim. Have you noticed the people around you (The ones that are close) change when you get close to them. Scary thought to me, I had a chance to love, but I was too afraid to change her. I look back, and know I wish I did. I had friends change because I expressed a new way of thinking. I made people slightly more weird, and they likes it. You can do it :)