A battle that is never won

For a friend on here that is going through some dark thoughts. This is a piece i had taken down a while ago, because it cuts me pretty deep to think about that part of my life. But for my friend to lift her spirits and for anyone to review.

Author's Note

Enjoy

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

That was nice my friend ,as I understand it its about life and death..
How in your last hours you should fight to the end to live..
I like what you said,and the sound was so good...
however..I have another thought about it,I read a lot about it..those good people, and i would give example of
some great writers like O Neal,he died in a hotel room,he just laughed when he knew its time,and only said
Damn it,I was born in a hotel room and I die in a hotel room..then said God ,life how lovely you are..
I dont know why people, when its time, it looks so dramatic and hateful..I see it just like a beautiful journey
its like you change your seat or bus and continue to go on,no regrets no pains for those who really lived a lovely life
full of love to all..conscious of the good and bad of it,so secure all through life,so at peace with themselves
they never hurt here or on the other side,its like the same ,always home as I see it..
I really loved this..

[...MysteryGirl...]

This is good...

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Yay..um yes, I fight stopping ..I remember that I am depressed sometimes I remember that I was and once was inprisoned by it.. but I do not invite it in for tea it can't be comfortable with me..this poem I say yay to in sincerity.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

"Never stop fighting... fight stopping" ... very wise ending to a brilliant oral artform. Depression is something so many struggle with... sad to watch and most have also seen it in someone around them. At the core of your own findings.. you share that you just didn't let anyone get to even really know you.. that which truly could be the core of the issue of the continuous struggle within. Love the feeling and strong ending.. hope others take the time to listen to this one! Thank you for sharing! =)

[Sheila Kline]

WOW....what an awesome presentation! I certainly hope many will take the time to listen to what you have written and posted!
It is the kind of "hit you in the gut" kind of writing that really drives your point home! Yes, depression is a terrible illness that many struggle with for a lifetime. I like the way you view it as, "Today, today, today"!
YES, TODAY!