Blue

my ramblings...

Author's Note

My ramblings on a photo project. Ex's eye, yes... that's my reflection. Not sure of it so I placed it here in my sandbox... You all tell me. Have at it.

Reviews

[PearlPoet]

Now this is beautiful... I think this poem came from deep within you! I have read some of your other poems as well but this is my favorite... I have to tell you something though and I hope you wont be offended!
Your poems really should have structure, a form rather than long lines that way you can control the viewer where to start, stop and amplify the feelings you are trying to express

[Lucifer Jones]

No offense whatsoever my friend... Always open to suggestions and advice. I ramble. I know that. I struggle with structure. One of many demons...*smirk*(Can't be helped) I'm glad you enjoyed it and found something in it. Thank you so much.

[Tennessee]

Kid, it flowed nicely. I could see it all happening, the combining of the bodies then one body there alone. Just like they melted into each other to form something unseen. Nice kid, it projected very well.

[Lucifer Jones]

Thank you Tenn... Glad you liked it.

[Scott Metro]

Short....sad...

Enjoyed it.

Scott

[Lucifer Jones]

Thank you friend... Glad you enjoyed it.

[Scott Metro]

:)
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[Muse]

This is stunning. Her stare I will presume to be captivating...a bit like star gazing?

[Lucifer Jones]

Very much so... So much that I stepped in many a puddle. Happy you liked it. Thank you so much.