Vile

rambling...

 

Bound by all you’ve left behind, I am…

Drowning of my own design, I am…

Vile in my choice in life, I am…

Just a thief of always now, Iam…

 

but I’m breaking

 

Just to be the one who sees inside your mind,

Just to be the one who brings you back in time,

Just to be the one who screams inside your mind,

Just to light the darkness once,

I’m blind…

 

Sickened by what I can’t see inside, I am…

Devoured by my own design, I am…

Vile in my choice in life, I am……

Just a thief of always now, I am……

 

And I'm breaking

 

Just to be the one who sees inside your mind,

Just to be the one who brings you back in time,

Just to be the one who screams inside your mind,

Just to light the darkness once,

I’m blind…

Reviews

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

Seems to be a regretful longing.
Rather melancholic. I liked the consistency in the lines and the images it showed.

My favorite lines were:
Just to be the one who sees inside your mind,
Just to be the one who screams inside your mind

-These expressed a desperate longing. The intensity was here.
Blindness, Confusion, ambivalence of the self could be rather vile.

Good write.

-Punishment