Star

You are like my bright

Star in what used to be a

Black hole of a life

Reviews

[Ethan Paz]

Good job in describing hopeless to hope by nature. Good haiku with a meaning.

[Stefano Ianiro]

The amount of meaning in this little piece is amazing. You did a good job of keeping it short and having significance at the same time. It makes me feel complete :) Very good poem.