Alone i thought...

Alone i thought...

A Poem by La Luna

Alone...
I thought, i thought about it in the morning
brushing away the night 
i thought about it in the shower
washing him away. 

When did silent become so loud 
shut up.
i can't hear myself think


Alone became my friend 
it beat me.

A place full of love became 
a prison 
I can't escape their laughter 
thoughts 
and schemes. 

You're all the same anyway
Alone... 
i thought, again i thought 
as i closed the world away. 

© 2014 La Luna


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Pax
Our pen always takes us to this kind of journey and feeling. I know this friend very well, the lonesome feeling. Perhaps I could call him - my lonely friend.

The loneliness in the dark corners of our mind.
the silent screaming thoughts...
the silent emptiness we felt...
with all that it create many unforeseen thoughts or unexpected thoughts.
It creates fear, noises that isn't there... or creates a barrier between your friends...
all that...
alone in our thought, is a sad feeling...
in silent our thought becomes the loudest..

very well expressed...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much... and you understand very well :) x



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When did silent become so loud
i can't hear myself think
shut up.

How well I know this feeling..trouble is...you can't run away from that.
This is very nice..well done Luna.
Enjoyed this.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

I'm happy you understand. Thank you Scott x
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

My pleasure..
Scott
In the begining you express your alienation, then in the last stanza you express that they are alone as well.
Excellently crafted

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much... i'm glad you noticed :) x
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Pax
Our pen always takes us to this kind of journey and feeling. I know this friend very well, the lonesome feeling. Perhaps I could call him - my lonely friend.

The loneliness in the dark corners of our mind.
the silent screaming thoughts...
the silent emptiness we felt...
with all that it create many unforeseen thoughts or unexpected thoughts.
It creates fear, noises that isn't there... or creates a barrier between your friends...
all that...
alone in our thought, is a sad feeling...
in silent our thought becomes the loudest..

very well expressed...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much... and you understand very well :) x
lovely poem on loneness, a kind of diffrent art is yours. carry on with your pen. loveya.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much. will do :) x

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Added on January 16, 2014
Last Updated on January 18, 2014
Tags: Alone, Sad, Pain, Bit dark, Love, Full, People, not me, sky.

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La Luna
La Luna

London, United Kingdom



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