Lonely Mile.

Lonely Mile.

A Poem by La Luna

Stumble and fall, you have no idea where you are. 
But I walk a lonely mile 
and no one to meet, when I finish this journey of mine.
I can turn back but what ending is waiting for me? 
Death? 
Surly not I'm still kissing the world 
and when I'm found I'll stop this messing around. 

Should I run? I can't 
If I walk through this storm 
I'll meet spring and summer 
And I'll embrace winter to 
But for now let me walk this lonely mile.

© 2014 La Luna


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Good job, Luna. I can feel that loneliness you've experienced. It's so much "fictional" to me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I'm glad you noticed. And it sometimes is to others, it's not just you. :)
El-Amin Yusuf Alronawy

10 Years Ago

Awww! Keep the good job, up!
Very relate-able poem. It's a very sad feeling when we realize that there are some things we can only do alone. Then all we can do is get it done. Great poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind review, it's good to know you feel that way to :)

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Added on March 12, 2014
Last Updated on March 12, 2014
Tags: Lonely, road, mile, found, rain, winter, summer, spring adventure.

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La Luna
La Luna

London, United Kingdom



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