The fake Wonderland

Where is the Truth?

Wonderland

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Above the ground we Wish of A Wonderland

A Land of Love ,Peace and Justice 

A Land for People of all races

A Land of hope for all to see.

How we Wish it could Exist

How we Hope that It Would Appear

But once we Drop through the Rabbit Hole

How our wishes change 

How we Scream and Shout 

To escape The Hole To the Fake Wonderland

We scream A useless Plead Of course

To go Back to our Home that we used to hate

Be careful What you Wish for

A fake Wonderland

The Wonderland we want 

For not all Wishes do what we want. 

As we get trapped in an eternal Spiral

Down the Rabbit Hole

Author's Note

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Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think it works well....pace-wise----

because the momentum is what we get caught up when we wish for what we don't have, get it, and then wish for what we used to have that we never appreciated...always appears better on the other side of the fence...but that is just it...only appears...isn't necessarily.