f**k

if that this life goes on and things will get better...
when i ask shall this happen?
when...?
when...?
when ...!
why does it seem that all of this is just happening right NOW!
what the f**k do people want from us?
yet we live our days and just keep moving striving to survive
just to lead a pointless life and then die well?
what is the point of all of this huh?
we are the same as a dog
there just to die
f**k this all just.....
f**k

Reviews

[Rachael]

i do not like this poem very much.
i am a dog lover, and having my dog die very recently i am angered by your statement
"we are the same as dog......just there to die"
otherwise, it is a fine poem,
i guess to get your anger out or something