Lord of The Flies Alternate Ending...

What would have happened if the Navy officer hadn't shown up? Let's see...

A mask, a paint,

To cover the marks,

To hide the shame,

To disguise my face,

Who am I?,

I ask as I peer,

Into the crystal water,

This is not me,

What happened to the boy,

With the handstands and fair hair?,

The appearance has changed,

But the heart is the same,

This is not the life I chose,

But as Jack and the other savages come near,

I lose my British heart of gold,

And pretend to be Ralph the Savage once more.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I lose my British heart of gold,
And pretend to be Ralph the Savage once more.

Ah! This was very heartfelt and beautiful indeed :(

[Tai-San]

This is very good. i love how you write. Great job.

[Victoria Harlequin]

Ooh, this is well written. Nice flow with your words too, great job overall!