Words Spill

 

 

photo by Katherine Sevonk sevonphotography

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About to open the door
into another world
she writes the final page of her story
frail hands shaking with destiny
there was a time life surged
when she summoned it
a time when tulips bloomed
and organs played lilting melodies
now like a bird poised
to take flight
at precisely the moment
her inner calendar dictates
she will fly
unafraid
I take odd comfort in knowing
this is what she wants
like my tears
words spill into my poem

Author's Note

Written sitting next to my mom's bed while she was in hospice three years ago. The anniversary of her death is near. Memories are churning.

Reviews

[Traci]

This piece resonates deep within my heart and soul. Tears fall as I feel the emotion in each word. I lost my mom three years ago as well, and miss her every day.

she will fly
unafraid
I take odd comfort in knowing
this is what she wants
like my tears
words spill into my poem

Beautiful words. May you find peace and comfort in your memories. Much love always, my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a heartfelt comment. Thank you very much. I am sorry you lost your mom three years ago as well. It is not easy. Lydi**

[Sanober]

Oh my friend.. this is so gracefully...yet powerfully written. your words honor a profound, silent sorrow. I could almost see rays of sacred light spilling from that open door. Lydi, may the churning memories bring you lots of comfort and peace. A deeply touching tribute to your Mom, my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

Sanober, I am touched by your comments. Thank you very much. Memories do bring me peace, yes. Lydi**

[Joyce S. Greene]

A vivid, moving poem, Lydi. I could feel your love and deep sorrow and my heart went out to you. My mother also passed around this time so your poem was especially significant to me. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you for your compassionate comment, Joyce. I hope I did not stir painful memories for you. Lydi**

[Distantview123]

A deeply personal write, but I know that many of us can directly relate to this, as we are reminded of someone now gone from our lives. A hard-hitting poem, Lydi, but a highly accomplished one! ~ Robert.

[Lydia Shutter]

Robert, I always appreciate your comments. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

My grandmother died in a nursing home, never having gained consciousness. My flight arrived just two days prior, which allowed me the time to "introduce" her to Eric, who was two. I placed his hand in hers, then cupped the two of their hands, in mine.

I don't believe their souls ever leave us. I think we carry them all the days of our lives.

Such a beautiful pen, my friend!

My love,
Kelly

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you for sharing your experience, Kelly. You are right. They are with us always. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

I cannot imagine having to write this... but you did a wonderful job. My thoughts are with you. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Jim, it was three years ago when she was in hospice and I wrote this. She actually passed the next day. She did it her way. This time of year is difficult for me. Thank you for your compassion and comments. Lydi**

[Keith]

A beautiful and touching tribute to your Mom. A very moving piece, it gave me goose bumps. Well penned indeed.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Keith. Lydi**

[Unclouded Eyes]

Good choices of imagery, built on a foundation of word which are artfully chosen. Well done.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much. Lydi**

[Pryde Foltz]

I was reminded of Margaret Laurence--one of Canada's best writers. What a fantastic piece of love and letting go. Splendid imagery.

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh my, what a compliment! Thank you very much, Pryde! Lydi**

[Souladareatease]

A feeling Write-Deeply Beautiful in it's sadness-You captured a delicate moment-with Care and Love!!!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments. Lydi**

[Souladareatease]

Honoured to read--I Lost My Mum two years back-My Best friend-Her only child...She was far too Young---Heart shown in writes Like Yours here-bleed the truth - not always easy to write...but truly felt when it is!!!

[Rita L. Sev]

Lydi, this brought tears. This is so respectful of the process; it is truly beautiful.

she writes the final page of her story... How wonderful to see it in her hands...

[Lydia Shutter]

Rita, this comment means a lot to me. Thank you. Lydi**