Keep It Real

a rhyming ditty to have a little fun with this graphic

You say I insulted your ego

Your feelings have been singed?

Hold it together, will ya?

No need to become unhinged!

 

Sure I try to be politically correct

Over and over I’ve read life’s rules

But you know I’m not a naïve sweet one

And my mama didn’t raise no fools!

 

Mind you, I don’t pretend to be an angel

But I’m not usually classified a b***h

Still, anything less than the naked truth

Will make my stomach twitch!

 

Aspersions are so easy to find

Best not to look for them if you ask me

Searching for the bad in people

Well, to me that’s just bourgeoisie!

 

To show you what a stand up "guy" I am

I’m willing to cut you a deal

I’ll only give you enough rope to hang yourself

If you’re not willing to keep it real!

 

 

Reviews

[redzone]

it's Lydi, a really real, always keeping it real, "buttercup".. er I mean a really real buttercup, keeping it Lydi .. er.. wait let me "suck it up" , it's a really real suck it up buttercup Lydi, keeping it poetically correct and "nice" ... and please please never ever be anything else. cheers to being real in 2014.. dare I say it, "buttercup" ;0), redzone now backing out the room before he gets in really real trouble... loved your poem Lydi... ~~redzone

[Lydia Shutter]

Laughing here....Curt, you really have a great sense of humor and your witty retorts to this sort of poem make me happy I wrote it. Thank you. Lydi**

[Kimmie]

Ha, this made me laugh so fudging much! Absolutely spontaneous write!

[Lydia Shutter]

Great to see a review from you, Kimmie. Glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by. Lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Funny but full of strength, Lydi. Lines are so powerful.
Let's keep it real, Lydi. Cheers!

[Lydia Shutter]

Glad you enjoyed Dh...always keep it real. Thanks for the review. lydi**

[Tom]

Indeed, if you can't stand the heat, get out of the kitchen cause the cooker ain't being turned off to suit you!

Super rhyming witty, ditty, with attitude and realism aplenty!

[Lydia Shutter]

A witty ditty eh? :) Smiling here. Thanks a lot, Tom. Lydi**

[Joyce S. Greene]

Your spunk is wonderful, Lydi. You always say what you mean and mean what you say, and that is nothing but speaking the truth - a quality to be admired by all. Thanks for another delightful poem.

[Lydia Shutter]

Glad you enjoyed it, Joyce. Thank you. Lydi**

[Rita L. Sev]

LOL! Funny, but a poem with a strong message - love the rhyme and rhythm, keeps the rollicking momentum of the piece. :) Thanks for the giggles, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

I use rhyme for most of my funnier....or more sarcastic....poems. Thanks, Rita. Lydi**

[Odysseus Wanders]

Wonderful. My stomach in NOT twitching as I read... but my mind is stirring.
Very nice Lydia. Hell, at least you give em a chance. So they cant say you didn't warn them.
Fun read.

[Lydia Shutter]

:) I always give a warning, you know it! Thanks so much for the review. Lydi**

[Emerald Seas]

Reading this in the office, I just howled! Love this, Lydi :) You're singing my tune with every stanza. Going in my favorites - and thank you for the laugh.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much. I appreciate the review....be careful how much you laugh at work though. :) lydi**

[Frieda P]

I'm literally laughing my arse off here, hmm, where have I seen this luverly graphic before? You know my new saying is going to be Suck it up buttercup! Love your sass and sarcasm, you've got moxy up the wazoo, thanks for the shytes and giggles Lydikey!

[Lydia Shutter]

After I sent it to you, I just could not delete it...HAD to use it for a poem. Yea, I have sass....I wear it proudly and sarcasm is required for survival in Joisey, isn't it? :) Thanks for the review, Frieda. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

You know it, for sure! Nobody could have done it better than you my jazzy friend. :-)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Raw and to the point... You can only respect directness, nicely done.

[Lydia Shutter]

You know it! Thanks for the review. Lydi**

[Sheila Kline]

"Ain't it the truth"? - there are those who stand in line for us to fall for their disguise when their real motives are written in the tea leaves.
I love this!!! The naked truth is worth undressing for...........lol

[Lydia Shutter]

LOL What a great line, Sheila. Thanks for the review. I appreciate it. Lydi**