Immortalize me

Immortalize me

A Poem by Lydia Shutter
"

it's Friday night!

"

artwork by Emmanuel

My fantasies plead to be etched
into your libido forevermore

just as Plato begged
to be immortalized by Socrates

Quench your thirst here and now my darling
yes…at the deep well of my desire
tell me in a throaty whisper
this is the tastiest libation you’ve ever sampled
while furious touches and spicy tastes

perform a stately saraband on the muscles of your chest
my silhouette will shimmer

in the flickering candlelight

 

Come...allow your anxious lips

to magically melt into my ivory skin
watch as our shadows become one
pleasure exquisitely simmering
                                then boiling over
believe it…the only truth is our passion

Indeed, the winds of reality
will dare to blow once more
but they have no place here
immortalize me
on this…our wondrous night


 

 

© 2015 Lydia Shutter


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Exquisitely and mouth-wateringly well writ. Tastefully erotic, & perfect for any night of the week

'My fantasies plead to be etched
into your libido forevermore' --- That's most definitely gonna be my next chat up line if ever I get the
chance. Good on yer Lydi x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Hey, if it works, I deserve a commission! LOL Thanks so much, Neville. Lydi**



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Exquisitely and mouth-wateringly well writ. Tastefully erotic, & perfect for any night of the week

'My fantasies plead to be etched
into your libido forevermore' --- That's most definitely gonna be my next chat up line if ever I get the
chance. Good on yer Lydi x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Hey, if it works, I deserve a commission! LOL Thanks so much, Neville. Lydi**
I dont think Plato and Socrates would ever have thought they're relationship would be compared to 'getting jiggy with it' but it so works Lydia.
Your formatting skills are beyond reproach Lydia - they really lead the reader'e eye amorously towards the climax.
Cold shower time !
Brilliant Saturday Eve sensual shenanigans. :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ANTO

9 Years Ago

lol - but we'll always have Paris *wink*
Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

:) have a great weekend, Bogey!
ANTO

9 Years Ago

Shure thing schweet-heart

(oops - I nearly fell into my Shhaun Connery voice there .. read more

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