Wolf

Hidden from view

I'm a black wolf in sheep's clothing
I'm a professional at this fake posing
I've blended in completely with the crowd
You've all been fooled by this fake shroud

Everyone seems to think i am so calm
But I've grown tired of this sham
I think it's time to unzip
And let the wolf inside me take grip

Let the monster take hold
And unleash its fury tenfold
To all those who think there above me
You will flee when me you see

There is a terrible anger that lies dormant
Holding it back will no longer be my torment
Now it will show the moment my eyes open
You will feel it before a word is spoken

The devil has nothing on me
Lucifer knows i am worse then he
I will rob your life, before I'm in sight
I am the wolf in the cold night

Reviews

[not your muse]

G o o d r h y m i n g ! L o v e d i t !

[Lykos]

Thanks for the review

[Correspondence]

Psst, tenfold is one word! ~Correspondence

[Correspondence]

On a positive note, not bashing you ;)

[Lykos]

No, thank your for correcting me. I appreciate it ;-)

[Stellaa3]

Great job! I like how the tone gradually changes and becomes more aggressive towards the ending, depicting the fury that is growing inside this human being. Very powerful poem.

[Lykos]

Thank you for the review

[Deep]

Wonderful poem having dark, mystery, restlessness and the anger. Opening line builds the whole poem "I'm a black wolf in sheep's clothing"- and then concluding lines wins the heart- "The devil has nothing on me
Lucifer knows i am worse then he
I will rob your life, before I'm in sight
I am the wolf in the cold night".
very well written!

[Lykos]

Thanks mate, glad you liked it. Appreciate the review