go forever

i couldn't imagine it happen. but she lost for me forever.

cring.. cring..

me: hello, what happened?
she: i am in need of your help. can you talk with me? for a while?
me: i am bit busy. i am calling you within ten minutes. please hold till then.
she: okay. please try.


after a while i called but........................

Author's Note

my last conversation with her..............

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to know when to stop. I have lost brother's to suicide. Was no call or warning. Everyday of my life. I wonder could I done something? Thank you for sharing the poem.
Coyote

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

D: is all I could type my friend (besides what I'm typing now) well done

[Mark]

wow, so short but so full! Interesting delivery, wish there was more to it though.

[Ees]

It is sad, a sad poem, but for some reason the format that you wrote this in made it feel like it was funny. There must be some way that you could pack more emotion into this?
The tone of her voice? what tasks you were completing? the ringing back to no answer?

it seems like specifics could help this not read like a script to a skit.

[Neville]

Blimey, I was not expecting that but.....




AGT's anyway, N

[Cynthia Man]

It's so sad... I read a story before kinda similar and I cried reading it... hope you can extend the the story, so we can get more from it... Anyways, it's very touching, and depressing....

[khalid]

i feel pity on the way how it went on, but i just wonder..is it supposed to be a poem or what?

[de_maruf]

i can't catagorised but want to share it. so............

[gombeggar]

hmm...such a cliffhanger, but yet not

[Dr. Wood ?]

great ending..hanging on the telephone...Good advice might be to seize the moment and don't put it on hold

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Mon Dieu! What happened to her? Don't leave us hanging like that!!! =8Q

[de_maruf]

just nothing after that
that's end