Surrender

I pulled out my white flag

I don't believe
In everything that you're giving.
I'm flatted over here,
Cornered and waiting to die.
I don't believe
In the purpose of the sun,
It used to be able to shine
The dark corner of this heart.

 

I've given up hope,
And waiting for the darkness to come,
There will be seconds that'll arrive
With no love that I shall obtained.
Why there were agony
When happiness was started to exist?
Why must there be black
When the white are already soothing?

 

I'm coming home.
Without a grudge,
I've accepted my defeat.
I'm home.
Without a grudge,
I salute you in your victory.

 

You taught me about the meaning of happiness.
You taught me about the meaning of sadness.
You taught me about the meaning of happiness.
You taught me about the meaning of sadness.
You taught me about the meaning of happiness.
You taught me about the meaning of sadness.

 

I'm coming home.
Without a grudge,
I accepted my defeat.
Dropping down your burden,
Slowly releasing,
You'll understand
Everything.

 

I've given up hope
And waiting for the darkness to come.
There will be seconds that'll arrive
With no love that I shall obtained.

Reviews

[Nishant Gupta]

ur poem is really nice write, do have a look to mine "QUEST OF LIFE"-
" this is about how one neglects his life ,pondering about this precious gift of nature unnecessarily ".

[patricia]

a disturbing heart wrenching write...I felt the despair and yet this poems title made me feel that sometimes endings are beginnings...when something higher than ourselves is permitted to lead the way. Thankyou.