Kiss the Windows Open

Puppy love and summer nights.

Kiss the Windows Open

 

Yes the breeze is sultry.

 

Lightly…

It does not so much caress you skin,

then move the air you are in.

 

Muddy words and emotion.

 

Simmering…

 

Smiles stretch horizontal-

Hot air and hot water.

 

Fresh sweat, just ready wet.

 

Moist…

Inviting geology,

temptingly seducing you.

 

Follow Me!

 

The sun through the trees pokes fun.

An annoying friend you tolerate,

who’s childlike habits are hard to break.

 

With a need for primal comfort.

Lazy backs and bones,

can make a hole a home.

 

Even hot, with the lights off-

when the sun sleeps.

 

Clothes un-cling and roam into stuffy closets.

 

Houses have open windows.

 

One Cricket Sings.

 

Only One Sheet.

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

interesting words
very vivid imagery through out-clothes un-cling and roam into stuffy closet
small touches of thought placed just right
love that title
thank you for sharing

[Trigorin]

Not bad. Some of your language is a little odd and stilted but you still managed to get your point across nicely. Just make sure to check your spelling and grammar.

[Ninja Empyrean]

by stilted do you mean pretentious?

[Trigorin]

No, I mean stiff and unnatural.