From a Guy's Perspective

From a Guy's Perspective

A Poem by RiNNA<3

FROM A GUY'S PERSPECTiVE.

She knows me,

I know her.

She likes billards,

So do I.

She has friends,

I do too.

She's in love with him,

And I'm in love with her.

 

I always watch her back from afar----

Constantly, quietly observing her.

For she wouldn't even waste

A second to glance backwards

And face me.

At the same time,

I don't have the will

To turn my back on her.

So what can I do?

I realize that I'm already

Under her spell.

 

Whenever I see her laugh,

A smile tugs at my lips.

When she steams up with anger,

I can't help but chuckle

Because I find her so cute that way.

When teardrops roll down her cheeks,

I get the urge to comfort her.

 

When she and her boyfriend struts

Down the hallways together,

My heart aches,

And I remind myself that

Being with her is

Impossible.

 

 

 

© 2009 RiNNA<3


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This was so nice really ,how I love the feelings and thoughts behind it..
Yes when you fall for her but she never cares or not even know that you ever do exist
Watch her back from a far,she would never turn around,neither would I turn from looking at her
under a spell I am,seeing her laugh brings life back to me,seeing her angry,it adds more charm to her
seeing her with other just too much aches..what could i do..
Sometimes I have these crazy thoughts that love is too selfish..if your partner is in love with another
then its never fair..sometimes crazy as it is ,I think a woman should divide her attention to all those
that really love her..I think the concept of debouchery or a woman along the ages had sometimes fell to so many
I think she was not bad ,she just kind of could not hurt her lovers,and I read that in many books of the last century
yes so many ladies so called libertines they will love and go even so far in love with so many that society was so cruel to them
But I am not ,I think it all comes from here ..sometimes I think in a crazy way ,love should be shared with many..yes that what I think
crazy as it is but so fair ,and you will not break so many hearts..just thoughts of mine
lovely write..

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Posted 14 Years Ago


Another Great Write!! Relatable and Flows Nicely!!

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Posted 14 Years Ago



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