For everything, thank you

For everything, thank you

A Poem by LadyT

As I walked you crossed my mind
You were so kind
I was so blind
°
Absolutely surprised
You were there and smiled
I remembered and almost cried
°
Everything we discussed
Loudly we laughed
A lot we talked
°
Always a special pleasure
Nothing to measure
Like treasure
°
My insecurity you noticed
For the reason you asked
My answer you enjoyed
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Nothing will make it undone
Nothing will change the present 
Nothing will hold me in this state
°
Your sentimets I knew
Our chances I blew
At last I grew
°
A part of me will always love you 
I wish all the happiness in the world for you
For everything, thank you

© 2019 LadyT


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Very frank poem about what can happen in Special relationships,Will take A look at your other work,your Poem would make most people Think about past loves and what they have learnt by them very thoughtful and well written.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'Loundly' should probably be loudly (2nd line 3rd stanza)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LadyT

1 Year Ago

Yes, thank you.
that's sweet and sad, I like the first verse, it's like a friendship that had to end, but it's okay, because you still have the memories of all the good.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LadyT

1 Year Ago

I do, he was my first love and good friend until it turned into something more I wasn't ready for, b.. read more
WeakFreak

1 Year Ago

I have those too, don't tend to make friends very well, surely don't seem to be able to keep them. S.. read more
Excellent. Not everyone can look back on a relationship that didn't last and find value in the experience. Perhaps doing so is a sign of maturity?

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LadyT

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
I would hope this is a sign of maturity.

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