Love to a, Love for, a hidden, Heart

My dear friend Jesse wrote this for me little while ago and I just thought it was so great that I and to share it!!

Do not say what you cannot, 

Take back,

Do not reveal what know it, 

will ruin what you made.

Be what they want and,

discard your heart.

Hide yourself and Let her grow.

Don't give it a chance,

no it will not, 

be a choice.

Can you not see what,

must be done?

Is the wall so fragile that,

professing could crumble,

all that you have built? 

I say it till it is full, 

of life i will stay still,

It is not from fear,

i keep to myself,

but out of growth, 

i contain myself,

I will not say what you know,

yet the Lord keeps, 

me close.

I am here for you,

as you need me,

to be here.

Author's Note

Yes, i know it sounds kinda awkward, but if you knew me and my life you would thnk that it was just any-other day in a life.

Reviews

[JessyJacob]

Just few lines, my heart screaming after reading this, "I have known you a at the very second, you touched me, but casualities to cross the path of ocean, with your invisible hand was very difficult. But I have known you at that time itself, hurts are making me freeze and shiver at this time of past, but would like to hear from you about me, my reactions/feelings, after seeing from near in a one way road". A single second is enough to explain, the whole body/soul name type. But this time, the maan itself.

[MadWaffles]

Do I know you, I feel like I might.

[JessyJacob]

RIghteous love comes for Righteous people. You should see whether you know me, I know you already.

[JessyJacob]

I think, I feel like, are sure words, you should say, I know, without middle words, which are making unsure. I will just delete my scraps, becuase they are hurting, and why I write becuase to let you know with clarity, it may be 1%, 100%, 2000% .... goes on..but all are same, just clarity.

[JessyJacob]

are unsure words* correcting mistake.

[MadWaffles]

... Jesse?

[JessyJacob]

Hhmmm? Are you looking for me?

[MadWaffles]

...I am soey.

[MadWaffles]

...I really am.

[Isabella Ivy]

I think this should be quite comforting and seems very sound in its advice. I'll be pleased to read some of your own writing :) Blessings to you! I.I.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

A mesmerising poem!!
Dear poet, I assure you that it's not an awkward poem, it's simply elegant :)
However, try using complex words to enhance the flow

[MadWaffles]

My friend wrote it for me.