After a Fight

Comfort food
Comfort place
Leave me alone
Give me space.

I can't calm down
If you are here
So I hide away
Until you're not near.

Author's Note

This is actually about me and my mom, we don't always get along well...

Reviews

[Ban Heo]

this is great. I love how naturally this poem rhymes in the first stanza. The only thing I dislike about the last one is how out of place "until you're not near" seems to be. There is a very comforting, yet sad rejection and I feel like that last line gives it away too much. Maybe something more like "So I hide away / with comforting tears."

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks for the review. :)

[Faffy]

loved the simple complexity of this poem you pack so much emotion and feeling into 8 lines well done!

-Roshan

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reviewing!! :)

[Strigoikillerr]

Definitely can relate to this. The short, kind of bluntness of this poem really reflects the situation. Really cool :]

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks. :)

[}Echo{]

I love this. It's really relateable. Great write. :)

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you!! (:

[}Echo{]

:))

[annonymous]

i love it and i can relate very well done

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

[Angela ☄️]

I can relate, dear. -_-" Oh the joys of fighting.....it's a very simple poem but packed with full enery on what your trying to portray. I love it.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you fir reviewing! :)

[InsanityWriter]

*for

[Angela ☄️]

Your welcome. :)

[Mrs Edith Hat]

I intended simply to deliver a perfunctory review, after you reviewd my work. I was pleasantly surprised. A rarity. Though personally I find it best that the gentleman remove himself, rather than the lady. You have actually suceeded in a small work in a clever summation of the argumentitive experience. A very well written and clever work.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reviewing. :) This poem is actually about me and my mom. I was not very clear about that though. Thank you again for reviewing, I am happy you enjoyed it!!

[Sami Khalil]

A nice short poem.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

:)

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

great lines :)

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you! ^_^

[Tasha]

Very nice lines, it was beautifully penned.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you! (:

[Tasha]

You're welcome

[Lover Of Words]

Love this so much nicely done

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for your review!! :)

[Lover Of Words]

your welome! :)