Dreams

 

All of my dreams

Are searching for a carbon foot print

The taste of wine to tingle on my tongue

Memories of my father to embrace heaven  

While I’m away I have nothing to show

All my dreams

Want to live like their dying

Walk on the edge of falling in love

Risk being in the moment for that one kiss

This heartache itches to be erased 

To climb up a mountain without losing faith

Every second be challenge by boundaries 

While I’m in a daze I’m just an average face

I’m hiding behind a black soul and soft heart

Playing dumb to make it through the pain

The clock ticks away my hundred in one ways to dream

All my dreams

Force on the thing

To live in a ribbon of beauty

Change the pace of her lover eyes

Become more the just an average face

Reviews

[Babe Roxx]

A very beautiful and soulful poem straight from the heart...just to be respected for who you are, which in this world, is hard thing to do when vanity is set with such high precedence. It takes strength to know that what we have in total presence doesn't last forever, but what does is that Love. Nicely done.

[larryb]

You are your normal drop dead sex goddess :)

[Pax Analog]

Touching, delicate, nimble, beautiful.

Your ability to make the reader feel you is impressive. One senses the pulsing heart, the pain and nascent joy.

"To live in a ribbon of beauty/Change the pace of her lover eyes/Become more the just an average face"

You're there, darlin'.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

You Are definitely not an average face; you are very pretty. But, I see the metaphorical value in your piece. I love the way this writing flows, and captures my attention. Great job.

[Arthur Crow]

A very dreamy spill of words flowing like a hypnotic nebula… Very well crafted and expressed!
Much enjoyed the wonder of your poem.

[Arlen]

I like it, dreams are a beautiful thing. The blueprint of our soul.

[Jeff Bresee]

You have a unique talent for writing. Glad I found your work, it is vey powerful. Do you ever try lyrics or song writing?

[Dream Weaver]

A very intense emotional write.
Feeling vulnerable exposed and
indecisive wrapped up in one.
I love this write..Nicely done
Anna....