Truth or lie

I could have told a lie,

But I chose the truth instead;

Thinking they sought it in all cases.

Conversely, my surmise was wrong.

They found me disgusting

And glanced askance at me.

Then later,

With a more crucial and delicate matter at hand

I made a rather sage decision

Or so I thought

I picked the lie

However, they noticed somehow.

They called me a liar,

Expressed their disappointment

And the obvious, they parted ways.

 

Author's Note

feel free to air your views.......the truth might hurt but a lie would worsen everything......lol.....enjoy it

Reviews

[Daniel Sala]

Nice poem, Manuel. In fifteen lines you get to the bottom of an aspect of human nature which concerns each and every one of us at some time. I am very glad to have read this piece, it's recounting of a person's decisions hides quite deep philosophical questions about self and society.
It is such a natural write, along with the subtle tongue-in-cheek humour, that it only adds to the overall quality, for me.
An excellent poem, in fact, no lie.

[Manuel Samo]

thanks Daniel for your very sincere criticism......I'm glad you enjoyed the piece......Your words inspire a lot of hope in me....You the best.....thanks once again

[Daniel Sala]

A pleasure, Manuel, lovely to read your thoughful work, look forward to the next one...