So here we have it.

one of my fav

So here we have it – fallen stars, broken bridges.

Whatever you want – name it, wasn't it yours?

Pain and false -

is that what you desire, my lord?

Crushed hearts, screamed wishes.

Very well – so yours it is.

Blame yourself.

I'm tired of chains, run far, not noticing pain –

You got too deep, my heart died already,

shell

Is all what is left. No tears, no hate,

but shame

In what I was blind. Looking at you, feeling your misery –

It smells like a sugar.

Farewell, my lord, farewell.

Die soon.

Author's Note

same, same.

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[Darian]

"Looking at you, feeling your misery � It smells like a sugar." I love that line, very descritive. I also like the use of "my lord", it gives the poem a unique personality. Very cool.