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You're on my Mind

You're on my Mind

A Poem by Marcus
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She's so far away 
but in my heart it fells like she's so near 
I ache for her 
Will she ever be mine? 
Not going to give up on her 
Drank too much 
Now last nights a blur 
but your face is still burnt into my mind 
Actions speak louder than words 
You told me that you loved me
but your actions tell me that you lied
I just want you to see 
that you're the only girl for me 
I'm on your side 
I'll stand by you 
I can no longer hide how I feel on the inside 
I'm in love with you
all I want to know is, 
are you in love with me? 

© 2016 Marcus


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Marcus
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Wanting to be with someone and not being able to.. A really hard thing to manage..One-sided love can be painful enough.. I loved the simplicity with which you captured the emotions here :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marcus

7 Years Ago

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed :)
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You are welcome! It was a pleasure ☺

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Added on November 24, 2016
Last Updated on November 24, 2016
Tags: love, in love, i love you, sad, alone, you, me, depressed, lyrics, blur, on my mind, all i think about, i need you, far away, why can't you see

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Marcus
Marcus

Birmingham, United Kingdom



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There's not much to say about me, nothing interesting at least. I think my writing speaks for itself, so check some of it out and let me know what you think. -Peace more..

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A Poem by Marcus