Sometimes

Sometimes..

**** happens..

Violin was singing with trees

My heart is crying with my eyes

But .......................

that was not me

My tears are screaming

and laughing

My body is flying

and drowning

But the day is gone

My hands aren`t mine

My hands are wanting and dreaming

to touch you

just one more day...

one more night

My lips aren`t mine either

My lips are speaking and screaming

wanting to tell you

that

I LOVE YOU

and

GOODBYE

 

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

Feels like the good by is permanent..
Format is fresh..
Enjoyed this.

Scott

[Bowers]

This is beautiful, the entire piece was a lovely write, I love the idea behind it, the feel in you're portraying, the only thing I would do, is change "My lips aren't mine too" into "My lips aren't mine either" and then instead of "wants to tell you" to "wanting to tell you" But the whole composition really spoke to me, and I admire what you've done with such beautiful thoughts. This actually left a sad impression on me, as this individual is saying goodbye to their love... great write!