"Luis"

                                                  

" Luis "

As I saw you
in my neighbor~ hood,
you saw me...

There I stood...

Teasing you with excited arrival
running down the street
to meet me...


You traveled...

Lovely pink roses of boquet
you held in your tender hand,
a kiss upon your *sweet lips*
Our *kiss* did land...

As we kissed, hugged and held hands
into mi corozon esta noche so mucha grand!!

Thank you the time we shared
I will always cherrish this...

With sweet happiness and tenderness...

~Mariposa~
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    9/7/09

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Oh those sweet kisses of youth and innocence leave us content in memories when we look back in time. A beautiful story of love. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

this is BS is just a poem...nothing real here!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Lovely darling - this is so heartfelt and delightful. Thank you.
Love and Light,
Siddartha

[deeps]

beautiful write I like this

[deleted]

This is a very sensual and beautiful piece. It shows the love connection between two people....that you described so well. I love how you put the Spanish twist in there. It made it spicy. Great read!

[StoryTailor]

Very nice. You used spanish the wrong way I think. But it's good anyway.