Please Say Yes Tonight

Please Say Yes Tonight

A Poem by Poet Pittinix
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It's a love poem.

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This is the new version of "Don't Say No Tonight."


Darling, I’ve fallen in love with you

You have full control of my heart

I told you my greatest desire

Oh baby, I belong to you exclusively

 

My heart will love you endlessly

If words were powerful enough,

You’d be my ladylove today

Come to me before I fall apart

 

Darling, please say yes tonight

All I’m asking for is your love

I’ve revealed my feelings for you,

So I’ll wait patiently while you decide

© 2024 Poet Pittinix


Author's Note

Poet Pittinix
Enjoy the reading.

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A very romantic write.
I enjoyed this read so much.
"Darling, I’ve fallen in love with you
You have full control of my heart
I told you my greatest desire
Oh baby, I belong to you exclusively" MY ABSOLUTE FAV STANZA.

-Amy

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poet Pittinix

3 Weeks Ago

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.
Amy R

3 Weeks Ago

You're welcome.
A heart felt poem.
I hope she enjoys it.
Very much enjoyed reading this piece.
I like love poems.
Keep it up! Take good care.
😄

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Poet Pittinix

3 Weeks Ago

Yes, thank you.
The_Ancient_Rock

3 Weeks Ago

You are most welcome.
😄

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Added on April 30, 2024
Last Updated on April 30, 2024
Tags: heart, love, desire, night, patience

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Poet Pittinix
Poet Pittinix

Kingston, West Indies, Jamaica



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Hi everyone, I'm an author from Jamaica. I write poems, songs and short stories. Do not send me any private messages. I came here to read and to publish my compositions, not to engage in controvers.. more..

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