![]() A Tale of Courage and HopeA Story by Chris Needham![]() This is the first chapter of my children's novel that I wrote last year. If anyone would like to read any more then I hope you can help me publish it!![]() Chapter One Hello
there, stop me if you’ve heard this one; courageous young fellow sets off on a
quest to save a kidnapped young maiden. Really? Are you sure you’ve heard that
one before? I don’t think you’ve heard this story though. Trust me on that.
I’ve a few twists and more than enough adventures to keep your attention. I had
pushed open the door to the tavern and settled down on my usual table by the
fire. A few friends quickly gathered round me, along with a few new faces. Hey! Hey! Don’t you dare shut this book on me.
I promise it will be good, I promise. We’re going to get started at the best
place of all to start a story. The beginning. So here we go… On
the edge of a small forest there stood a farm. The farm had been lovingly
tended for tens of years, all by the same family. It consisted of a barn and
farm house for its residents and a good spread of fields around it. Running
softly a little way from the farm house was a stream. It was surrounded by
reeds but kept a constant supply of fresh and clean water flowing past the farm
house. On one of the fields was a young man carefully turning the soil. He was
wearing simple and practical clothes. His boots were worn but well looked
after. He was of average height but with a muscular build, mostly from the very
physical nature of his working life. His brown hair hung down over his neck,
his forehead and just covered the tips of his ears. His skin was tanned from
long days in the fields. His blue eyes blinked and stared at the field below
him. He mopped his brow with the back of his right hand, sighed, took a deep
breath in and carried on turning the soil before him. Jacob
had worked on the farm ever since a young age, having inherited it from his
deceased mother and father. They had died when he was still only a teenager but
years of hard work and graft had built his strong body and an eager mind. Jacob
lived on the farm with his sweetheart Eliza. They had been together only a few
short years yet their love knew no bounds and continued to grow each and every
day. Eliza emerged from the farm house and carefully carried over a small
tankard of water to Jacob as he worked. She was a little shorter than Jacob and
with long chestnut hair that hung below her shoulders. It was held back with a
simple knitted hair band from her face. She had emerald green eyes that
sparkled in the dying sunlight of the day. Her skin was soft and glowed with a
warmth of love for Jacob and the outdoors. She wore a red dress that hung just
below her ankles that she had lifted and carried in her free hand as she made
her way across the field. Jacob paused from his work and drank deeply from the
refreshing tankard. “Thank
you Eliza, how is it you always know when I need a break?” Jacob asked, looking
lovingly at the pretty young woman standing in front of him. “Because
I actually know you better than you know yourself,” laughed Eliza, taking back
the tankard and setting it on the tray she had been carrying. “Another hour and
then come in, it’s lonely in there cooking all day.” Eliza looked back at the
farm house, smoke chugged from the chimney showing a fire was lit in the
hearth. “Aye,
Eliza, you do know me well and I shall be hungry for your cooking as always,”
replied Jacob. He leant over and placed a tender kiss on her cheek. Eliza
smiled, lifted her ruby red dress above her ankles and made her way back to the
farm house delicately avoiding the soil that had already been worked. Jacob
watched as she left and then returned to work, carefully shifting the soil
ready for the next season’s planting. A little over an hour later and the sun
began to set in the sky, dipping down toward the horizon. Jacob rested himself
on his tools and stared out into the distance, beyond the forest. He could see
the nearby hamlet town of Arista, where he did most of his trading and selling
at the market, and beyond that the vast plains where a solitary dirt track led
the way to the industrialised capital city of Veria. There the King ruled and
fairly controlled his surrounding lands. Jacob had only been to Veria once but
had been amazed at the advanced machinery and the general hustle and bustle of
day to day life. As he gazed out Jacob felt relieved and happy with the life he
had made for himself here with Eliza. Turning on his heel and collecting his
tools together he made for the farm house, the windows beginning to glow in the
quickening darkness from the light of the hearth and lamps inside. Jacob
pushed open the door of the farm house and stepped inside. The warm air hit him
and soothed his aching muscles and immediately Eliza was there with a hot tea.
Jacob wrapped his arm around her and took the tea with the other. The couple
walked slowly to the dining table where the broth Eliza had been cooking had
been ladled into two bowls. The pair sat down, Jacob smiled and Eliza’s
brilliant green eyes twinkled back. They both tucked into the broth; sharing a
freshly cooked loaf of bread from the centre of the table. “I
left the tools in the barn for tonight and locked up the animals. It was a long
day but coming in to this makes it all worthwhile, you know?” Jacob pushed back
his tousled brown hair and mopped his brow with a nearby cloth. His simple
clothes fitted snugly around him. Jacob had never been the biggest but working
on a farm had toughened him and he could certainly handle himself when rustlers
tried to steal cattle or crops. “This
farm doesn’t run itself you know, we put in the hard work and it pays us back.
It’s always been like that.” Eliza delicately wiped her mouth, set down her
spoon and added more broth to her bowl. Jacob tore off some more bread and ate
hungrily. “I
don’t know, I just always feel like we’ve both been meant for more in life. Not
that I don’t enjoy working the farm and keeping things running, we’ve a good
life here, but lately, my feet, they’ve just been itching. I was looking
towards Veria again tonight…” Jacob’s words drifted off as he remembered the
sunset. “Hey
dreamer, don’t forget I’m here!” Eliza threw her spoon and it bounced off
Jacob’s head, throwing little droplets of broth into the air and bringing Jacob
crashing back to earth. “I
know, I know, just silly dreams.” Jacob rubbed his head gingerly and smiled. “I
love you Eliza, I don’t need anything more from life than what we have here.” “We
can itch those feet together you know. Soon. I promise. Your dreams are my
dreams too you know” Eliza said, collecting up the bowls and picking up her
thrown spoon from the floor. She kissed Jacob on the forehead as she passed by
him. She walked over towards the hearth to clean up. Jacob stared out of the
window and smiled. The dark night began to set in. Now
I know what you’re thinking; slow start. Yeah, it is a little. But things are
about to pick up, and I mean really pick up, quite literally in a way. You’ll
see. I left some little things in there to tease you, but left out a really big
point that comes back later on in a big way. What’s that? I’ve actually got
your interest? Oh go on then, I’ll carry on, another round barkeep…? The
night had quickly set in and the cold with it. Jacob and Eliza lay fast asleep
in bed covered in a thick knitted quilt. Outside the farmhouse something
stirred. Something crept towards the barn and precisely picked the lock,
opening it up. The animals inside slept soundly and the something moved with
such intent that not a creature stirred. That was until a lit torch was thrown
onto a bundle of hay and quickly caught light. The nimble hands which had
picked the lock quickly left the barn on light feet and the cloaked figure
crept around the side of the farm house ready for what would surely come next.
From inside the barn animals woke and began to create a racket loud enough to
wake even the dead. A horse galloped from the barn and around the farm house.
It didn’t see the cloaked figure pressed closely against the side of the farm
house’s stonework and continued to neigh and whinny in distress. From inside
the farm house a lamp lit. Jacob rushed out of the farm house door and stared
at the barn. His heart sank, “Fire!
Fire! The barn’s on fire Eliza!” He hurriedly swept up a nearby bucket and
dashed to the stream to fill it with water. He didn’t notice the cloaked figure
slip into the farm house behind him. Jacob
continued to throw water from the bucket over the fire but it was all a waste.
The fire was spreading quicker than he could put it out. He turned, eyes wide
and quickly filling with tears, both from sadness and the thick smoke now
rising into the night sky. “I can’t douse it, nothing’s working.” He ran back
to the stream, bucket in hand. The cloaked figure emerged from the farm house
just as Jacob was turning back towards the burning barn. Jacob squinted his
eyes, not quite believing what he was seeing in the darkness in front of him.
Lit by the fire of the barn and standing in the open doorway to the farm house
was the cloaked figure that had started the fire. Over the cloaked figure’s
shoulders was slung Eliza, her arms swinging loosely in front of her and her
legs dangling behind. The figure saw Jacob looking and immediately set off in a
dash around the farm house. Jacob screamed as he gave chase, “Hey, hey you!
Stop, that’s my…that’s my Eliza!” Jacob rounded the corner of the farm house
and felt a heavy thud on the back of his head. As he dropped to the ground,
eyes rolling round into his head he saw the cloaked figure standing before him,
Eliza still hanging from its shoulders. As
Jacob slept, he dreamed. He dreamt of that day fetching water from the stream.
He dreamt of finding something in the bottom of his bucket. A necklace. A
golden metal necklace that glinted in the water and immediately drew his eye.
He lifted it from the water and was all at once drawn to the pendant hanging
from it. A round, green, oval reflective stone, no bigger than an acorn, set in
a simple golden frame. The stone was translucent and captured and held his
reflection. As it hung from his hand the necklace twisted slightly. Jacob was
transfixed by the stone as it twisted, holding his reflection and his
attention. Suddenly the stone twisted enough to catch the sun’s rays that
bounced into Jacob’s eyes, freeing him from his trance. Jacob rubbed his eyes
and lowered the necklace from sight. He shook his head and looked into the
bucket. There was nothing else in there except the water he had been collecting
from the stream. Slipping the necklace into his pocket he continued collecting
water. Jacob
dreamed of that evening, when he had sat down with Eliza again to read tales of
years gone by and felt the necklace still there in his pocket. He dreamt of
removing it and showing it to Eliza who had at first been captivated by it in
the same manner as he had. “It
matches your eyes,” he had said, undoing the clasp and placing it around her
neck. It had fitted her perfectly. Jacob dreamt of how Eliza had thanked him,
how she had kissed him lovingly and how they had continued reading the book
together. In the story a valiant knight was fighting an evil dragon to save the
soul of a princess who had been left for sacrifice. It was just an old story
but Jacob and Eliza had loved reading it together. So innocent and so pure. So
brave and so charming. So dangerous yet so brave. Jacob had looked up from the
book and toward Eliza, who appeared to be glowing. Eliza smiled at him and
reached out her hand toward him, her mouth opening into a silent scream. Jacob
dreamt of a cloaked figure emerging from behind Eliza that night, even though
there hadn’t been one there. The cloaked figure enveloped Eliza and drew her
into the darkness, and no matter how much Jacob reached for her, she was still
drawn away from him. Jacob dreamt of a bump to the head and then of rushing
water and a slow lapping sound, like the waves on the beach… Jacob
awoke and groaned. His cheek was wet and his head was sore. The sun had risen
and lit the farm. Well the sore head is obvious, Jacob thought, remembering the
strike from the mysterious and unseen assailant the night before. The wet cheek
not so…Esroh leaned down and licked him again. The large brown and white horse
was stood over Jacob trying to raise him up. It snorted quietly and blew
Jacob’s hair with its breath. Jacob raised a hand, patting the horse on the
side of its head and then held onto Esroh’s bridle as it lifted him to his
feet. “Thanks
old friend, thanks.” Jacob patted Esroh again on the side. The horse sighed and
snorted again, tipping its head towards the barn. “Oh yeah, the barn.” Jacob
turned and looked at the burnt out husk of the building that had stood there
for years until just last night. The sheep grazed lazily in the surrounding
field. Jacob rubbed his tender head again and faltered on his feet. Esroh bent
down quickly and Jacob slung his arm over the horse’s strong neck. “Thanks
again friend,” Jacob added, steadying himself on his feet. “Oh Esroh, what are
we…” Jacob’s mind skipped back to the night before and he remembered the
cloaked figure that had stood before him. The cloaked figure that had been
carrying Eliza’s unconscious body. “Esroh, where’s Eliza?” The horse humphed
sadly. “Oh, oh no. They took her didn’t they, they took my Eliza.” This time
Jacob fell to his knees and Esroh let him. Jacob wept and scrunched his hands
into fists. Esroh trotted off towards the still standing farm house, the open
door swinging in a gentle breeze. Jacob cried for a while longer and then
suddenly halted. His fists tightened and he looked up at the farm house. He
stood with a steely determination and strode towards the farm house. “Be
ready Esroh, there’s a few things I need to get but then you must be ready,”
Jacob said stroking his friend’s neck. © 2012 Chris NeedhamAuthor's Note
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