Ice Cold

Ice Cold

A Poem by Maroon Surreal

You gave me

The coldest triggering feeling

I've ever felt

In the chest.

Realizing we're almost close

But did not have the rest.

I'm sorry for just being good

And not being at my best.

You like her, don't you?

She must have been blessed.

© 2012 Maroon Surreal


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damn, i feel that way lots of times. i truely love it . u make sumn so short mean much more than what some of us see. and thats what i need to do, or learn to do. i do good when i take sumn and make a whole new deal out of it. this is a definate like

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful. Sad, yet honest heartfelt words that it soul probably have taken me at least 5 verses to convey.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 13, 2012
Last Updated on April 16, 2012
Tags: almost, cold, feelings, frustration, love, poem, poetry, writing, ice

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Maroon Surreal
Maroon Surreal

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Candles and fading sheets, I write my heart of bits. I write poems and other short stories. Really short stories. I'm still learning and willing to learn more, read more and write more. I like .. more..

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A Poem by Maroon Surreal