Hesitant

Hesitant

A Poem by Mary C

Your reentry, a disturbance
in this newly settled place,

 Why now, reach for intimacies
long since packed away?

Why weave pathways back toward
my particular longings?

It would be possible, I suppose,
to again gather myself to your side,
reattach my heart to your ribs
and my faith to your touch.

I could, I imagine, believe
in all I thought we were.

But
when restless energy envelopes you
and your mind tires of my sanctuary,
and your eyes seek refuge elsewhere

when your head makes lists
of all that is not working.

When once more,
you discover yourself leaving,
 
I am not sure I can heal again.
I am not sure I ever did.

© 2011 Mary C


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Amazing!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


incredible write... amazing

Posted 12 Years Ago


AWESOME WRITE!! **high-fives the screen** that was beautiful in expression and self question... **uuuugggghhh** I know this feeling all to well... I appreciate this write!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amazing work! A delicate emotion perfectly expressed!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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MAC
oh this is so good. i tend to go on the forever side, burn the bridge if needed. move on and with guarded heart. you already know that book had a lousy ending why read it again.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mary - very, very well put.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I could the desire and the questions in the amazing poetry. Some pain won't ever heal. Just are reminders for us to be safe and wise. I like the ending to the outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amazingly beautiful! You have a gift of expressing the emotional heartbreak in this poem. Great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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tk
amazing. beautiful imagery.. the title is just perfect for the poem.. :) i loved the way you captured the reader.. keep it up!! ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


You have really impressive style and this write is not excluded from it. Excellent work. The way you choose your words to describe what you want to is just amazing!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Mary C
Mary C

London, Ontario, Canada



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