Confused Love

Confused Love

A Poem by Honey-Bee
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Haiku

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My mind is boiling
Stir fry on the back burner
Steam clouds my vision

© 2014 Honey-Bee


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Love can confuse us. Good to have clouded vision when love is near. Very nice use of words. A complete poem in 14 words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote! Glad you enjoyed it!
Very interesting and clever enjoyed this short piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks M.K. Jawdat!
Love it, short sweet and speak volumes... Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks PoemRodent!

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Honey-Bee
Honey-Bee

Ventura , CA



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I like to read and write poems and stories I love nature, kids and God. I enjoy the outdoors very much. I love the beach and mountains. I love my four grandchildren and hope to have more. I have.. more..

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